the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site.

the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site.
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The two figures below depict the movement
development
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of Norbiton Industrial from the present into the future. The present map shows an area with 8
factories
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built with rivers in the north and a farm in the west. Meanwhile, the next
development
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illustrates more
buildings
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and facilities. In general, the site plan has changed. Future
development
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will have more housing
buildings
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than before.
Firstly
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the
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present map, factory
buildings
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became more dominant. It has 8 areas specifically three
factories
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around a belt and five
factories
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across the street.
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, in the future
development
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, there are many
development
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. Not only housing, but they will build other facilities like playgrounds, schools, medical centres and shops. The factory build will be destroyed and no more
factories
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there. The area will become a house for employers. They will build seven housing. One building is across the river which is beside the farmland, another is separated. Three
buildings
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are close to the playground, school and medical centre. The
last
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three are in the first exit of the second round. They are beside the river.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words development, factories, buildings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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