the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site.
The two figures below depict the movement
development
of Norbiton Industrial from the present into the future. The present map shows an area with 8 factories
built with rivers in the north and a farm in the west. Meanwhile, the next development
illustrates more buildings
and facilities. In general, the site plan has changed. Future development
will have more housing buildings
than before.
Firstly
, the
present map, factory Change preposition
in the
buildings
became more dominant. It has 8 areas specifically three factories
around a belt and five factories
across the street.
In contrast
, in the future development
, there are many development
. Not only housing, but they will build other facilities like playgrounds, schools, medical centres and shops. The factory build will be destroyed and no more factories
there. The area will become a house for employers. They will build seven housing. One building is across the river which is beside the farmland, another is separated. Three buildings
are close to the playground, school and medical centre. The last
three are in the first exit of the second round. They are beside the river.Submitted by sastyoke on
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