Some people say that E book and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. Do you agree or disagree?
Now
what
modern Correct pronoun usage
apply
technology
is more essential in every individual life. Some experts say is
no that Unnecessary verb
apply
this
modern technology
takes place and finished conventional newspaper
and magazines. I strongly Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
agreed
repeat Add the particle
toagreed
this
process. In this
essay. I will discuss the reason
, my satisfaction to commence with the first reason
, isn't that's the convenience of the viewers of traditional newspapers and magazines. Many people have their own support and computers so that they can find any type of magazine and book on the Internet. Is it like Waze it is Very
easy way to search and get any information at home. Far is ample if anybody who does not go far by book and magazine Add an article
a Very
paper
if he has not any transportation facility so then
you can't get any book. Any news on Correct article usage
the Internet's
Internet's
with the help of modern Change noun form
Internet
technology
, moreover
, I can't say that everyone preferred to convenient
Add a missing verb
be convenient
with
every field of life. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, another reason
of finished traditional newspaper
and Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
magazine
is that the Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
paper
to make with three raw which causes environmental pollution. So that many people cut the trees to make the paper
, but this
will destroy environment
. Add an article
the environment
For
instance
increase Add a comma
,instance
the
pollution and many animals did not have shelters Correct article usage
apply
such
as jungle
In conclusion, I think with
these reasons, Change preposition
for
e-book
and modern Fix the agreement mistake
e-books
technology
will replace the traditional newspaper and magazines, the reason
or convenient
of the Euros, and reduce the Replace the word
convenience
paper
to protect environment
Add an article
the environment
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite