Some people say that E book and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. Do you agree or disagree?

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modern
technology
is more essential in every individual life. Some experts say
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no that
this
modern
technology
takes place and finished conventional
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and magazines. I strongly
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repeat
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, my satisfaction to commence with the first
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, isn't that's the convenience of the viewers of traditional newspapers and magazines. Many people have their own support and computers so that they can find any type of magazine and book on the Internet. Is it like Waze it is
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easy way to search and get any information at home. Far is ample if anybody who does not go far by book and magazine
paper
if he has not any transportation facility so
then
you can't get any book. Any news on
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with the help of modern
technology
,
moreover
, I can't say that everyone preferred to
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with
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every field of life.
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, another
reason
of finished traditional
newspaper
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and
magazine
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is that the
paper
to make with three raw which causes environmental pollution. So that many people cut the trees to make the
paper
, but
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will destroy
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.
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increase
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pollution and many animals did not have shelters
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these reasons,
e-book
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and modern
technology
will replace the traditional newspaper and magazines, the
reason
or
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of the Euros, and reduce the
paper
to protect
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