According to a recent study, the more people use the internet, the less time they spend with real humans begins. Should we worry about the effect this is having on social interaction or should we see the internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities worldwide? Discuss these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

vA number of

people

have an opinion that locals should pay spend less money than foreign

tourist

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tourists

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when they come to the cultural and historical heritages in a nation. In my view, I completely agree with

this

statement because it provides an accessible destination for local

people

and enhances the

tourist

attraction management’s income.

Firstly

, it gives easier access for local

people

to learn about

culture

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and

history

in

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their own country

especially

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for

students

. It is because they don’t need to think

over

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the

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spending too much.

Students

can learn more and more about the things inside the museum or cultural heritage. In fact, the

students

will come frequently to do research or healing because the tickets are cheaper.

Thus

, it benefits not only

for

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the

the

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student itself

,

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but

also

the

tourist

attraction management.

For example

, the tickets for foreigners are 30.000 rupiahs and 10.000 rupiahs for

students

which make

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a student

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who

learn

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about

history

tend to visit

heroes

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monument oftentimes to research

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history

.

Secondly

, the cultural and historical attractions

managements

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management

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can gain more money from foreigners.

In other words

, the tickets are more expensive twice or even thrice.

Hence

, the management will get more advantages from the tourists.

However

, it has to be equal

with

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the service for the tourists who visit the museum or cultural heritage place because as tourists they don’t know well about the country’s

history

or

the

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culture. If the tour guide

Prambanan

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to Prambanan

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Temple in Magelang

as

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an

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instance

give

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bad service or cannot explain

of

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the

history

well, the

tourist

will

confused

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be confused

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and even feel disappointed. In conclusion, the cultural and historical attractions give easy

an

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educational access for

people

particularly

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student

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students

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and get financial benefits

more

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from

the

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foreign visitors.

Nevertheless

, the service must be worth the money.