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The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017
#tourist #carribean #island
The given line graph provides information about how many people doing holiday
in
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on
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 a particular
caribbean
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Caribbean
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island
among
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from
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 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,
total
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the total
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 of
visitors
in
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to
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 the
island
 increased gradually and it was
devided
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divided
 into two categories that
was
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were
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visitors
 who stop
in
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on
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 cruise ships and
also
visitors
 that stay on
island
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the island
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. The first categories rose steadily
while
 the second fluctuated.
To begin
, the total of
visitors
 started
in
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at
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 one
millions
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million
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 in 2010 and it jumped to around 2,8
millions
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million
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 in five years,
moreover
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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 it became 3,5
millions
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million
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.
Furthermore
,
visitors
 who stayed
in
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on
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 the ships began
in
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at
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 almost 0,25
millions
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million
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 and it grew to 0,5
millions
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million
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 in 2011, but it decreased to the same
number
 as before which is 0,25 million in
next
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the next
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 year,
also
it
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apply
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climbed gradually
until
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to
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 2
millions
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million
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 in 2017.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of
visitors
 who stayed
in
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on
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 the
island
 opened
in
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at
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 around 0,75
millions
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million
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until
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in
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 2011 and it hiked to 1,5
millions
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million
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 in the two years,
in
addition
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,addition
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 it was
stagnan
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stagnant
stagnation
 between 2013 and 2015. In the next years, the
number
 declined to around 1,75
millions
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million
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 and it came back to
same
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the same
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number
 in 2015
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, millions, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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