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Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathy Include memories you have about the dog Invite your friend to do something with you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,

#friend #dog #sympathy #memories #addresses #___
Dear Sonu, I'm writing
this
 to show how disheartened I'm feeling after hearing the news of your dog's death. I'm feeling sad about his sudden demise of him since I too have spent a lot of time with him during our college days. Please let me know when you will do his
last
 rites. I still remember how we used to play with him when I was in Delhi.
Also
, I'd a picture of both of us with him during Goa's trip when we're playing on a beach. Sadly, I cried a lot after looking at that photograph because we've got a lot of memories joined with it. I know, you must be feeling disheartened
due to
 the demise but will you like to join me on Kerala's trip next month after the
last
 rites? I hope you'll feel much better once you'll go to another place with me. Hope you will stay strong. Yours lovingly, Jaskaran
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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