In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, is becoming increasingly common to
paid
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pay
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by cellphone
apps
.
This
essay will explore the advantages
an
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and
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disadvantages of
this
payment
digitalization.
Furthermore
, it could be said that
one
of the biggest advantages of paying by mobile
phone
is that it helps mobilization of the
economy
.
On the other hand
,
one
disadvantage is that relying on digital
apps
could be dangerous for privacy in the long term.
Firstly
, let´s talk about
one
advantage of paying by mobile
apps
.
One
of the biggest advantages is that
,
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that type of
tecnological
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technological
advances helps people consume easily,
therefore
it generates more mobility in the
economy
of countries.
For
example
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if you are in a
foreing
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foreign
country, you can use
this methods
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these methods
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of
payment
to buy food
in
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on
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the streets
,
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or rent a car or an apartment. That said,
one
advantage of using
phone
apps
to consume, is a way to
mobilizate
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mobilize
a
countries
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country's
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economy
Secondly
, I will
analize
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analyse
a
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the
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disadvantage of relying
in
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on
upon
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digital
apps
for paying.
While
it feels really easy to pay
by
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for by
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phone
your
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for your
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food, it is
also
a problem, because
this
means that all your expenses will
be register
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be registered
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by the
diferent
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different
technologycal
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technological
companies
involve
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in the
payment
.
For instance
, when we buy
in
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from
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Amazon, all our interactions are
being
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safe by the company.
Thus
, relying
in
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on
upon
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digital
apps
to
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,
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apply
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will become dangerous for our privacy. To summarize, the biggest
adavantage
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advantage
of paying by mobile
phone
apps
is that it will help the mobility of the
economy
, at the same time
one
disadvantage is that over time, using these systems will help us
loss
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our privacy. In regards to the future, if countries want to continue using
this
type of
methods
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method
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of
payment
, they should have more hard regulations.
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