Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job. Describe a job you have found for him/her including: - What are the duties? - Why do you think it is a good job for him/her? - What does he/she have to do to get it?

Dear Joe From your Facebook post,I found that you are looking for a part-time
job
.
Therefore
,I have a great opportunity for you and the
job
is really suitable for what you want. The
job
is about housekeeping
work
.
Firstly
,the working
hour
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hours
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would be 3 hours per day and 2 days off on weekends.
Secondly
,The
job
duties are mopping the floors,keeping the kitchen clean, and doing laundry.
In addition
,the house owner is a single male who doesn't have much time to keep the house tidy.
Moreover
,the is the
work
location is quite near your house which only takes
5-minute
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a 5-minute
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drive.The working time is flexible,you can choose the time you want and tell the boss before
work
.The payment is AU$35 per hour before Tax, I believe it is a very good salary for
part-timetime
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part-time
work
. Please tell me if you are interested or not,I should reply to the owner within 2 days. You can call me or text me and if you have any questions just ask me. Best wish Diana LIN
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task achievement
Try to avoid minor grammatical errors and improve punctuation usage for better clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure the paragraphs are distinctly separated with clear ideas in each of them.
task achievement
The letter clearly mentions the job duties, benefits, and why it suits Joe, fulfilling the task requirements.
task achievement
The writing tone is friendly and suitable for addressing a friend, keeping it informal yet informative.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is organized and divided into different sections covering all requested points.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time job
  • duties
  • responsibilities
  • skills
  • interests
  • suitability
  • local café
  • retail
  • library
  • customers
  • organizing
  • stock management
  • application process
  • resume
  • cover letter
  • online application
  • relevant experience
  • interview preparation
  • attire
  • encouragement
  • support
  • tailoring application
  • people skills
  • passion
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