The maps below show the future plan about the Biology school in a particular university
The diagram
show
us some changes Change the verb form
shows
of
the Biology School in a particular university in the future plan.
It is Change preposition
in
cleared
that there are some new facilities and infrastructure Replace the word
clear
will
be built in the second diagram. The second change is the lecture room and teaching building will be divided into two parts to have more classes. Correct pronoun usage
that will
Finally
, the IT centre will be expanded to have more space and facilities.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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