Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an argument that
books
provide more advantages for youngsters than what they receive from television and electrical devices such
as computers. In my standpoint, both types of entertainment are able to bring benefits to a certain level, but still
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books
should be a better priority for children
.
On one hand, reading books
can help children
to enhance the
ability in reading and understanding certain languages. In fact, content in Change the word
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books
seems to be more compelling to them than literature texts studied at school and this
is an effective chance for them to expose with
new vocabulary which is useful in daily communication. Change preposition
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For instance
, when children
are reading comics, the combination of both pictures and words provide
a more realistic imagination for Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
children
to apparently comprehend and memorize the meaning and practical application of certain words. As a result
, if parents convince their offspring to study new languages such
as English, reading books
could be one of the best decisions .
On the other hand
, it is undeniably
that exposure to television programs or computers can be an alternative to language education but in a more modernized orientation. Change the word
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Nevertheless
, recently, there is an abundance of unclean contents
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are
widely spread and advertised on the internet. Correct subject-verb agreement
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For example
, youtubers
or content creators Correct your spelling
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saying
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on
their videos on youtube which have been accessed by a Change preposition
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wide-range
of audiences, where the majority is the young generation. If parents do not take responsibility to prevent their Correct your spelling
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child
from approaching them, the influences of technology will be deleterious on their future Fix the agreement mistake
children
behaviors
.
Taking everything into consideration, I reckon both ways of reading stories from Change the spelling
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books
or the use of technology seem to be beneficial to children
in different ways. However
, they should be oriented to entertain suitable resources on TV or computer games so that they could study and develop in the most appropriate way.Submitted by zanhduy on
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