A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Tram, I am writing to propose the utilities at the
city
for you know when you come here to work. One of the utilities in the
city
that you should know because there are many quality restaurants with very delicious food.
For example
, there is a world-famous Sushi restaurant with attractive hot pot dishes and sashimi.
In addition
, there are so many supermarkets for you to shopping.
For instance
, The Emart is the biggest supermarket in the
city
with many branches. Here, you could use many public transports to go around the
city
.
In addition
,
this
public transport is cheap price.
Therefore
, you can buy tickets to travel to the Emart supermarket conveniently.
For example
, A bus ticket near my house cost 50 cents for a ride.
Besides
, you should attend many clubs to meet many new people.
For instance
, a club that you should attend is the English cafe club. Here, you can speak English with people who make you so happy. I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Yours sincerely, Hieu
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