The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table gives information about how many
people
come to visit Ashdown Use synonyms
Museum
both times prior Use synonyms
and
after it was renovated. The pie charts illustrated the result of satisfaction of visitors who entered the updated version and the outdated version of Ashdown Change preposition
to and
Museum
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the number of Linking Words
people
who visited Use synonyms
were
increased Correct subject-verb agreement
was
as well as
the pleased results of visitors after the reconstructions.
It was evident that after the reconstructed Linking Words
museum
, there were over 20,000 Use synonyms
people
coming more than the preconstructed one. Prior to Use synonyms
refurnished
the Wrong verb form
refurnishing
museum
, forth in ten Use synonyms
people
stated that they were unhappy Use synonyms
of
the Change preposition
with
visiting
. Replace the word
visit
While
only slightly over forth in ten visitors were happy about it.
During the year of Linking Words
new
version Correct article usage
the new
museum
, there was Use synonyms
significant
increase Add an article
a significant
of
satisfied and very much satisfied accounted for 40%, and 35% respectively. In comparison to the old one, approximately 30% of satisfaction grew. Change preposition
in
Additionally
, the Linking Words
amount
of dissatisfied results of Change the quantifier
number
new
Correct article usage
the new
museum
Use synonyms
were
dramatically drop to 15%.Change the verb form
was
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, museum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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