The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides data about the
amount
of shop closures and openings in one county from 2011 to 2018.
Change the quantifier
number
Overall
, it is an obvious fact that both the number of closings and openings decreased.
According to
the graph, the ratio of new shops
was about 8500 in 2011 and oscillated between 2011 and 2014. The quantity
of new Change the quantifier
number
shops
declined significantly to 4000 in 2012. Also
, this
ratio increased moderately to 6000 till
2014 and again dwindled to 4000 in Change preposition
in
next
year. Correct article usage
the next
Additionally
, Over the period from 2015 to 2016, the rate of disclosure shops
remained at the same level. Moreover
, İn 2017, the number of novel shops
went up minimally to around 4100. Finally
, in 2018, the rate of new shops
was equal to the lowest level at 3000.
İn addition to these, the ratio of closure shops
oscillated too. This
section was roughly 6400 in 2011 and went down minimally to 6000 in 2012. Besides
, the amount of shutting down shops
was climbing to over 7000 and declined by approximately 6600 between 2012 and 2014. Furthermore
, this
part was dramatically pummeled to about 700 in 2015. Over the period of 3 later years, the proportion of shutting down shops
was growing to around 5100.Submitted by ismayilovemin530 on
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