Some argue that patriotism is the primary cause of wars globally. Others feel that it serves to prevent less ethical politicians from running a country and starting wars. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many feel that patriotic feelings do more to foment, rather than prevent, conflicts and potential
wars
. In my opinion, though Use synonyms
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can be a positive force in a nation, it is more likely to serve as the justification for armed conflict.
Those who value the benefits of Use synonyms
patriotism
argue that it is a tool to oppose international interventions. Use synonyms
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is most often the case in countries where it is possible for citizens to voice their opinions publicly. A standout example of Linking Words
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would be in the United States as the government is often engaged in unpopular conflicts abroad Linking Words
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wars
in Vietnam, Iraq, and Afghanistan. Many critics make the argument that the US was originally isolationist and should not now interfere in the affairs of other countries. Use synonyms
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appeal to the patriotic roots of the country is persuasive.
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However
, it is more common for politicians to encourage nationalistic feelings to justify foreign Linking Words
wars
. There are examples of Use synonyms
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from both the modern era and past historical epochs. Linking Words
For instance
, in Medieval Europe, there were frequent Linking Words
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of aggression between France, England, and Spain. The rulers of these countries used both religious and ethnic or nationalistic justifications for either expansion or defensive measures. Over time, Use synonyms
patriotism
came to be considered a method to distract residents from the domestic situation and motivate them towards a common goal.
In conclusion, despite the legitimate potential advantages of Use synonyms
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within a country, I feel that it is more likely to serve as a catalyst for international conflict. In fact, individuals have very little Use synonyms
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impact on whether or not their country enters a war.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite