The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The four pie graphs illustrate increase,
on
the ages of the inhabitants of Change preposition
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Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and Use synonyms
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their expection
expection
for 2050.
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expectations
Overall
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it is clear that
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Yemen
the prediction Use synonyms
indicuate
that Correct your spelling
indicate
indicates
indicated
percentage
of senior and Correct article usage
the percentage
adult
people will Use synonyms
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an
while
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children
will Use synonyms
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a decrese
decrese
in future. Correct your spelling
decrease
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, Italy will Linking Words
show
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increase
in Add an article
an increase
elderly
, Correct article usage
the elderly
while
it will Linking Words
show
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decline
in Add an article
a decline
proportion
of Add an article
the proportion
children
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adult
.
Looking at Fix the agreement mistake
adults
chart
in more detail, the percentage of Add an article
the chart
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adult
(15-59) in Fix the agreement mistake
adults
Yemen
will expect to dramatically raise from 46.3 to 57.3 %. Use synonyms
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Itely
the proportion of Correct your spelling
Italy
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adult
will predict to Fix the agreement mistake
adults
significant
went down from 61.6 to 46,2%.
Regarding Change the word
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children
, the percentage of Use synonyms
children
will expect to Use synonyms
show
a remarkable decline in Use synonyms
Yemen
from 50.1 to 37 % , Use synonyms
while
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in
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Itely
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Italy
also
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decrease
from 14.3 to 11.5 Add an article
a decrease
percent
. When it comes Change the spelling
per cent
for
older people, in Change preposition
to
Yemen
predict Use synonyms
indicate
from Correct subject-verb agreement
indicates
slightly
increase from 3.6 to 5.7 %, Change the adverb
slight
whereas
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Itely
senior people will Correct your spelling
Italy
show
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a dramaitcally
dramaitcally
went up from 24.1 to 42.3 per cent.Correct your spelling
dramatically
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