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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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The four pie graphs illustrate
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the ages of the inhabitants of
Yemen
 and Italy in 2000 and
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their expection
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expection
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expectations
 for 2050.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 in
Yemen
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indicate
indicates
indicated
 that
percentage
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the percentage
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 of senior and
adult
 people will
show
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an
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increase,
while
children
 will
show
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a decrese
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decrese
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decrease
 in future.
In contrast
, Italy will
show
increase
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an increase
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 in
elderly
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the elderly
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 ,
while
 it will
show
decline
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a decline
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 in
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
children
 and
adult
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adults
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. Looking at
chart
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the chart
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 in more detail, the percentage of
adult
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adults
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 (15-59) in
Yemen
 will expect to dramatically raise from 46.3 to 57.3 %.
In contrast
, in
Itely
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Italy
 the proportion of
adult
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adults
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 will predict to
significant
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 went down from 61.6 to 46,2%. Regarding
children
, the percentage of
children
 will expect to
show
 a remarkable decline in
Yemen
 from 50.1 to 37 % ,
while
in
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Itely
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Italy
also
 will
show
decrease
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a decrease
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 from 14.3 to 11.5
percent
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per cent
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. When it comes
for
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to
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 older people, in
Yemen
 predict
indicate
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indicates
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 from
slightly
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 increase from 3.6 to 5.7 %,
whereas
 in
Itely
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Italy
 senior people will
show
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a dramaitcally
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dramaitcally
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dramatically
 went up from 24.1 to 42.3 per cent.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, adult, show, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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