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the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.

the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.
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The given bar chart represents the percentage of the growing
population
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 in a particular location worldwide, providing predictions for the future.
Overall
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, 2000 was the most populated year
according to
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 the whole world statistics, where Latin America was the most popular destination.
To begin
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 with, it can be clearly seen that just over 10% of the
population
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 was in Africa in 1950, followed by approximately 13% in Asia in the same year.
In contrast
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, slightly under 40% of people lived in Africa, which was the same proportion for Asia in 2000. The largest
population
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 resided in Latin America, at 70%, in 2000, followed by the global rate, which was just under 50% in the same year.
According to
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 the predictions, Latin America will continue to be the most populous region in 2030, at 70%.
However
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, Africa is projected to have the smallest
population
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 share, just above 50%, followed by Asia, at 55%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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