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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this good for a country, while others belive that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
people
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 are paid high wages in many countries. Its commonly believed that it will be beneficial for the nation,
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 many argue that the country should restrict the salary earned by citizens. I believe that it has a positive impact on the nation's development. In
this
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 essay, I will briefly elaborate on both views and explain my opinion.
People
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's pay depends on their skills, their education qualifications, and their job experience, so, it is unfair to set the same wages for all. Companies tend to increase
people
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's ages to keep them motivated towards their work.
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, When
people
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 get high
salaries
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 their quality of life will improve and they will buy expensive products
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 as I phone, costly cosmetics and aesthetic products to keep their living place looking good,
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 malls and shopping complexes will be built in that area, through them government gets huge amounts of taxes which can be
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 used for the development of state or country.
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, When a certain group of
people
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 earns huge amounts, it will widen the social barriers between the
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, not only that it will
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 attract multiple brands to that area which results in the shutdown of a few local companies.
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, when a group in the community earns high
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, it will result in a rise in daily expenses of because the arrival of new brands which replaced local products.
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, some
people
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 think that it will be good to limit
salaries
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. In conclusion. I believe that with more number of
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 who earns huge amounts of
salaries
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 will benefits countries' growth from taxes, from the establishment of new malls, and MNC companies.
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