Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, one of the heated issues is that many

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across the world have obtained significant achievements in professional

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. These

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invested a huge amount of money

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improving

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,

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instead

of developing public

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. Many people think that

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condition may lead to many drawbacks.

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, I do believe that it has both pros and cons. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion on

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issue. There is no doubt that improving

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sports

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one of the top concerns in many nations. There are many reasons for

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. For one thing, these

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want to boost their position in the international

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arena. For another, training professional

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can bring enormous profit. The most familiar example of

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is that many European nations

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as Spain,

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,... are now known as

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powerhouses because they have won many FIFA World Cup Championships. In spite of the fact that building

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to train top

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does have advantages, its negative effects are obvious. The main

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of

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is that it can result in a decline in the use of public

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infrastructures. It seems quite clear that improving

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to train

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has many benefits.

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the advantages, the above issue can lead to many drawbacks. If these nations are too focused on obtaining international achievements without paying attention to constructing

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for

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sports

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, it will cause extreme effects on public health. Take Vietnam as an example, the Vietnamese government has recently invested in coaching

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.

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, they might not pay enough attention to improving the quality of

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physical activities as the shortages of

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are happening in many provinces. The continuity of

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condition may cause a great contribution to the decrease in public

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physical activities.

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, in many socially-advanced

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, they were able to maintain a balance between proficient

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and

community

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sports

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. In short, more measures should have been taken by the government on constructing physical

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for the

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. In a nutshell, it is vital to keep a balance between coaching top

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and improving public

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quality.