The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram displays how instant
noodles
are produced. Use synonyms
Overall
, producing instant Linking Words
noodles
contains 8 simple stages. the basic product for producing Use synonyms
noodles
includes water, flour and oil.Use synonyms
While
vegetables and spicy are added to Linking Words
noodles
for test delicious.
The first step, used flour in storage silos and utilizing an enormous mixer for mixing flour, water,and oil. Use synonyms
Then
rollers make dough sheets products afterwards in the fourth stage strip them into thin pieces. Over the course of the next stage, Linking Words
noodles
are shaped into discs Use synonyms
whereas
in the sixth ,stage Linking Words
noodles
are ready for cooking with oil after which the drying process started.
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Moreover
, vegetables and spices are added to Linking Words
noodles
discs, and after that put into the cups. Use synonyms
Finally
, all cups that are prepared are gone through a machine that labeled and seals the cups to Linking Words
released
in supermarkets.Add a missing verb
be released
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