These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Nowadays in many areas of the world majority of tutors do not want to teach secondary
school
students
. One of the main causes can be the less productivity of
learners
and mental difficulties with
children
which appears
while
the teaching process.
This
problem can be tackled by adding contemporary kind of technologies to the teaching system and
also
by reducing the total amount of mentally poor
students
. We are living in a world where studying is becoming one of the main aspects of each student,
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there are
also
a number of issues with the teaching system. Secondary
school
teachers try to do not to pay any attention to
children
’s academic level or even though avoid teaching youngsters. The main cause of
this
problem is that many young
learners
do not learn hard as elder university or high
school
students
, which leads to less mental productivity in studying, because most
children
are used to spending most of their time entertaining activities. ,
Also
teachers avoid working in secondary schools, because of the less communication with
school
children
. Tutors are able to explain the subject as
learners
will listen to them, but not all of them want to get some beneficial information.
For example
,
according to
the statistics of the Journal Daily Bugle in 2023, published an article «The total amount of time of Elementary but
also
secondary
school
students
is being spent for entertaining activities the most, rather than mental or academic works and in
last
decade it has been grown up to 44 per cent». Despite these ,causes
this
issue can be solved by equipping
school
teachers with the
last
kind of teaching technologies
such
as electronic boards or High speed
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internet, which might make the working process with
children
easier. Another solution for
this
problem is that the
school
rule system must be rehanged by adding there some straight rules.
For example
,
children
with a small number of good marks must be illuminated from the teaching process for a few days or even must be dismissed at
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. In conclusion, secondary
school
pedagogues are being reduced because of the low levels of young
children
’s academic ability,
also
the poor attention of
learners
to the lesson. These problems can be solved by increasing the number of interesting techniques for studying and by compositing new and straight
school
rules.
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