The diagram below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now.

The diagram below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now.
The provided map gives data relating to marked changes in a
village
in two various periods of time. (1995 and present) From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the number of accommodations increased and new 6 physical structures were added. It is noteworthy that the northeast tip and south part of the
village
changed significantly. Looking at the map meticulously, it can be seen that in the northeast tip of a
village
modernized with sports facilities, farmland, which is situated in the northeast tip of the
village
, replaced with golf and the forest park behind it cut down and there constructed a tennis. The housings in the west and north have enlarged in numbers, which depicted 4 new extra accommodations.
As well as
the buildings mentioned above, a fishing port is removed, which is placed south of a fish market.
Furthermore
, the fish market was made into apartments,
while
the shop opposite the fish market was renovated as a restaurant. There was build new car park nearby the hotel in the east-south part of the
village
.
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