The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.

The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph illustrates the data on the
number
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of store closures and
openings
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in one particular country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, the
number
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of shops that closed and the
number
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that opened both show remarkable fluctuations throughout the given period of time. It is
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noteworthy that the
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of closings outpaced
openings
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except for 2011 and 2015. During the first four years, from 2011 to 2014 the
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of closures varied between roughly 6000 and 7000, after which it fell sharply to its lowest point, about 500, in 2015.
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,
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number
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rose significantly to approximately 5000 and stayed at
this
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level until the end of the period. The proportion of new shops started from its peak, at about 8500, which resulted in around 2000 shop
openings
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. After a steep drop to 4000 in 2012,
openings
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made a rebound, reaching nearly the same
number
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of nets in 2014, at just over 6000.
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figure
then
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dropped to its 2012 level in 2015, where it remained until it dropped to its lowest peak at 3000 in 2018.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, openings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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