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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The graph shows underground station passenger number in London.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The graph shows underground station passenger number in London.
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The line graph below illustrates the number of
passengers
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 in London using the underground station.
Overall
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, The number of transit that used the underground station fluctuated continuously from 6:00 to 22:00. From 6:00 to 8:00, the travel was increased dramatically, from
one
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 hundred to four
hundreds
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 people, reached a peak of the chart. After that, It dropped sharply to below two
hundreds
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passengers
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 from 8:00 to 10:00. That was a same happened with from 16:00 to 20:00, which below
one
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 hundred
passengers
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 at 16:00,
then
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 rose rapidly to slightly four
hundreds
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passengers
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 at 18:00. But It showed a downward trend at 20:00, nearly
one
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 hundred people. About the time from 10:00 to 14:00, It was an upward trend steadily, from below two
hundreds
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 to up to three
hundreds
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.
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, It was the lowest number in the chart, which is below
one
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 hundred.
On the other hand
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, from 20:00 to 22:00, It was slightly upward trend at 21:00, from slightly
one
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 hundred to over
one
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 hundred and fifty. After that, It went down around
one
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 hundred and thirty
passengers
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at the end
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 of the day.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, one, hundreds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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