The given bar chart illustrates how many British persons donated to charity in ages throughout the period of 1990 until 2010.
The given bar chart illustrates how many British persons donated to charity in ages throughout the period
of
1990 until 2010.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that over the duration,people
from 36 to 50 years
old were up the list through 1990. While
youth from 218 to 25 years
bottom of the list over the duration in question.
In 1990, regarding the provided details, youths from 18 to 25 years
who donated to charities accounted bY around 17% of all ages. then
, the donation year witnessed a dramatic increase between 26- and 35-years
individuals. after that, with the increasing of age
the donation rate was growing until it reached its peak from the old Add a comma
,age
age
of 36 to 50 years
.Then
it returned to decrease Agan until 65 years
old people
accounted by 33% of them are donating to the charities.
On the other hand
, in 2010, young people
from 18 to 25 years
old were lower than those of the same of their age
in 1990 by one of ten.
in addition
, when the older people
from 26 from
35 Change preposition
to
years
old accounted for 24 donated persons in that period. then
the individuals between the old age
of 36 to 65 years
old experienced a gradual growth in 2010 until they reached 39% donated person
. after that, they saw a slight decrease in the donated Fix the agreement mistake
persons
people
over 65 years
old by 35%.Submitted by aliaelarabi5 on
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