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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has been observed that the expansion of the
English
language
 ups will exceed its downs.In my perspective, I completely agree with the previous statement,
this
 is because above half of the countries take
English
 as a second
language
besides
 their mother speech.
Furthermore
, nowadays, the majority of jobs ask for
this
languages
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. On the one hand, currently, most companies require
English
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language
 as a main skill. because a large number of jobs are based on computer work and social media and all these aspects need a person who knows
English
.
For instance
, If the individual needs to work in IT work, he needs to read
as well as
 write the inputs in
English
 since IT works rely on Widows software and
this
 platform is Totaly in
English
.
therefore
,
English
 is a widespread
language
.
On the other hand
, there is a brighter side to
this
 spread, which is Most
of
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the
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countries currently speak in
English
due to
 that spread the person will ameliorate his speech with their international friend and
this
 aspect will offer him to travel to many places where people speech is
English
 without any fairs of misunderstanding them neither losing in place nor cannot read the instruction of the foreign countries.
To conclude
, I believe
that is
 evident the
English
language
 has many facilities that can outweigh
the
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demerits
it
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,
thus
 will superior society to communicate will others easily,
furthermore
, will provide several job opportunities.
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