The modern mega-city has many problems. What are the main problems facing large cities today? What should be done to alleviate these problems?

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The development of
mega-
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city
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has increased rapidly which is attracted people to come in the hope of finding a new job. It is undoubtedly that the
city
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is the centre of businesses and industrialization which gives more opportunities for a brighter future. In
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,essay I shall provide some explanations relating the causes where it leads to the increasing level of pollution
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traffic conjunction.
Mega-
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city
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usually become the place with the highest spending
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the consumptive characteristic since the citizens work in the many head offices,
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the economic cycle is more rapid in these places.
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, many job seekers come to
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city
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in the hope of having a job,
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, some people speculate even though they have no skills.
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, in
Jakarta
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, the capital of Indonesia, from 2005 until 2022 more than half a million people came to
Jakarta
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each year which has made
Jakarta
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overpopulate.
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condition affects the raising number of traffic conjunctions in
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metropolitan
city
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because of the outnumbered population. In my perspective, the government should make a regulation that encourages businesses to build their office in another
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, reducing the centralization of the head office in
Jakarta
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.
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,
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the offices, the
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area is
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built surrounding the
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city
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which raises the level of pollution
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as Co2 resulting by manufacture industries.
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, Tangerang, one of the
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city
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city
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right next door to
Jakarta
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that have hundreds of manufacturing industries. The fact that
Jakarta
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is the most consumptive
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in
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country makes businessmen build their
industry
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around
Jakarta
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, reducing their transport costs to the major market.
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,
Jakarta
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is declared to be the most air polluted in Indonesia responsible for the low level of citizen's health conditions.
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Industry
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has more profit for the effective distribution cost, they should start to develop in another area, because they can reduce cost from labour cost which is lower in some cities
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as Semarang, Surabaya and Batang. In conclusion, the main problem of
mega-
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city
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overpopulation has to be solved by starting to decentralise business offices
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the
industry
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areas that have to be built in other cities, lowering urbanization. Starting from now, the government
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businessmen should take
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problem seriously, if there is a synergy between both parties, I do believe the problem can be solved.
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