The modern mega-city has many problems. What are the main problems facing large cities today? What should be done to alleviate these problems?
The development of
mega-
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city
has increased rapidly which is attracted people to come in the hope of finding a new job. It is undoubtedly that the Use synonyms
city
is the centre of businesses and industrialization which gives more opportunities for a brighter future. In Use synonyms
this
,essay I shall provide some explanations relating the causes where it leads to the increasing level of pollution Linking Words
as well as
traffic conjunction.
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Mega-
Use synonyms
city
usually become the place with the highest spending Use synonyms
due to
the consumptive characteristic since the citizens work in the many head offices, Linking Words
thus
the economic cycle is more rapid in these places. Linking Words
Therefore
, many job seekers come to Linking Words
this
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city
in the hope of having a job, Use synonyms
however
, some people speculate even though they have no skills. Linking Words
For example
, in Linking Words
Jakarta
, the capital of Indonesia, from 2005 until 2022 more than half a million people came to Use synonyms
Jakarta
each year which has made Use synonyms
Jakarta
overpopulate. Use synonyms
This
condition affects the raising number of traffic conjunctions in Linking Words
this
metropolitan Linking Words
city
because of the outnumbered population. In my perspective, the government should make a regulation that encourages businesses to build their office in another Use synonyms
city
, reducing the centralization of the head office in Use synonyms
Jakarta
.
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On the other hand
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besides
the offices, the Linking Words
industry
area is Use synonyms
also
built surrounding the Linking Words
mega-
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city
which raises the level of pollution Use synonyms
such
as Co2 resulting by manufacture industries. Linking Words
For example
, Tangerang, one of the Linking Words
mega-
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city
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city
right next door to Use synonyms
Jakarta
that have hundreds of manufacturing industries. The fact that Use synonyms
Jakarta
is the most consumptive Use synonyms
city
in Use synonyms
this
country makes businessmen build their Linking Words
industry
around Use synonyms
Jakarta
, reducing their transport costs to the major market. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
Jakarta
is declared to be the most air polluted in Indonesia responsible for the low level of citizen's health conditions. Use synonyms
Although
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this
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Industry
has more profit for the effective distribution cost, they should start to develop in another area, because they can reduce cost from labour cost which is lower in some cities Use synonyms
such
as Semarang, Surabaya and Batang.
In conclusion, the main problem of Linking Words
mega-
Use synonyms
city
overpopulation has to be solved by starting to decentralise business offices Use synonyms
as well as
the Linking Words
industry
areas that have to be built in other cities, lowering urbanization. Starting from now, the government Use synonyms
together with
businessmen should take Linking Words
this
problem seriously, if there is a synergy between both parties, I do believe the problem can be solved.Linking Words
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