The modern mega-city has many problems. What are the main problems facing large cities today? What should be done to alleviate these problems?

The development of
mega-
city
has increased rapidly which is attracted people to come in the hope of finding a new job. It is undoubtedly that the
city
is the centre of businesses and industrialization which gives more opportunities for a brighter future. In
this
,essay I shall provide some explanations relating the causes where it leads to the increasing level of pollution
as well as
traffic conjunction.
Mega-
city
usually become the place with the highest spending
due to
the consumptive characteristic since the citizens work in the many head offices,
thus
the economic cycle is more rapid in these places.
Therefore
, many job seekers come to
this
city
in the hope of having a job,
however
, some people speculate even though they have no skills.
For example
, in
Jakarta
, the capital of Indonesia, from 2005 until 2022 more than half a million people came to
Jakarta
each year which has made
Jakarta
overpopulate.
This
condition affects the raising number of traffic conjunctions in
this
metropolitan
city
because of the outnumbered population. In my perspective, the government should make a regulation that encourages businesses to build their office in another
city
, reducing the centralization of the head office in
Jakarta
.
On the other hand
,
besides
the offices, the
industry
area is
also
built surrounding the
mega-
city
which raises the level of pollution
such
as Co2 resulting by manufacture industries.
For example
, Tangerang, one of the
mega-
city
city
right next door to
Jakarta
that have hundreds of manufacturing industries. The fact that
Jakarta
is the most consumptive
city
in
this
country makes businessmen build their
industry
around
Jakarta
, reducing their transport costs to the major market.
Thus
,
Jakarta
is declared to be the most air polluted in Indonesia responsible for the low level of citizen's health conditions.
Although
this
Industry
has more profit for the effective distribution cost, they should start to develop in another area, because they can reduce cost from labour cost which is lower in some cities
such
as Semarang, Surabaya and Batang. In conclusion, the main problem of
mega-
city
overpopulation has to be solved by starting to decentralise business offices
as well as
the
industry
areas that have to be built in other cities, lowering urbanization. Starting from now, the government
together with
businessmen should take
this
problem seriously, if there is a synergy between both parties, I do believe the problem can be solved.
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