You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear Maam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have been experiencing some issues regarding the dining table in our apartment. I am Anna Chee,one of your tenants and just recently moved into room number 303 which is located on the 7th floor of your unit. Let me explain my situation

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, I just found out that one of the dining table chairs was broken.My mother told me that it is not safe to use and it can be dangerous for children.

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,the nail of the chair is already removed and it can be a cause of injury when we sit it during every meal.

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, the aircon in my room is a bit noisy every time I turn it on and causes us difficulty sleeping at night. I would appreciate it if you could send someone to inspect the aircon and replace a new set of dining table on Monday at 2pm. Thank you and looking forward to your immediate action on

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matter. Yours Faithfully Anna Chee

ding Sat Aug 12 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

171 words

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