In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

People
have a myriad of views on whether the rapidly ageing
population
is enhancing the
country
's
development
.
Although
there are benefits to increasing the number of elderly in a
country
, they are outweighed by the disadvantages. Among the positive sides of a rising
population
of aged
people
. probably the most significant reason is that old
people
can share their experiences and knowledge with youngsters. Since aged
people
had faced lots of changes and difficulties throughout their livelihood, they will know the tactics through the mistakes they have made and the secret to success.
Therefore
, their advice and sharings are vulnerable, which helps young individuals and even society to avoid taking the scenic route to success.
Besides
, the elderly can even share traditional cultures, which helps to maintain the diversity of culture in a nation. The making of mooncakes is the prime example to explain it. The young generation in Hong Kong, nowadays, doesn't know how to make mooncakes by hand, which is the loss of our precious customs.
However
, there are lots of ways to protect our own traditional cultures,
such
as filming videos, writing literature and doing reports to record them. Meanwhile, success may be followed by failures, we should not force youngsters to depend on aged
people
and restricts their innovative ideas and it may hamper the city's growth eventually. Despite the benefits brought by the elderly, I believe that more elderly
people
in society will bring detrimental impacts to the
country
. The most vital disadvantage is that
this
will increase the government's spending on welfare resources, which other
development
spending,
such
as the
development
of technology, and science will be deprived
due to
resource allocation. It is without a doubt that the expenditure on healthcare and welfare system will be increased alongside the rising
population
of old
people
, which may cause a huge burden on the economy of a
country
.
For example
, Canada, the USA, and England are where the elderly's spending accounts for nearly one-third of total expenditure. Meanwhile,
due to
the physical constraints, the elderly's contributions to the physical
development
of a city are much less than the youngsters. Being a well-developing
country
, lots of infrastructure and buildings are required.
However
, construction sites need skilled and healthy labour and engineers, and the elderly can't bear that responsibility
due to
their health and body constraints. In
this
way, the ageing
population
is not only adding to the spending of the government but
also
slowing the growth of a nation. Under
this
line of thinking,
although
there are positive sides to a rising number of aged in society, It is believed that there are even more downsides which destroy a nation's continuous growth in the long term.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ageing population
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
  • advantages
  • experience
  • knowledge
  • contribution
  • economy
  • society
  • healthcare
  • youth employment
  • community
  • intergenerational support
  • volunteerism
  • mentorship
  • increased demand
  • pension costs
  • social welfare systems
  • workforce
  • productivity
  • intergenerational conflict
  • technological adaptability
  • dependency
  • effective
  • skill development
  • employment opportunities
  • intergenerational solidarity
  • communication
  • lifelong learning
  • technological literacy
  • age-friendly
  • social policies
  • infrastructure
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