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the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.

the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.
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The provided table compares the highest three countries of
population
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 rates which are
China
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,
India
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 and the
USA
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.
Overall
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 it is evident that
China
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 and
India
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 have occupied a considerable density of
population
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 in comparison with the
USA
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in addition
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 the urban
citizens
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 in the
USA
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 reflect the prevailing welfare and upgradation living standard.
To begin
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 with, as can be seen,
China
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 and
India
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 include the highest census rate in
population
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. Where
China
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 recorded 1415 billion
citizens
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 and
India
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 has become 1354 billion, they have relatively some differences. When
China
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 possesses the most significant
land
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 space which is 9388
million
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 kilometres square and
this
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 represents around quadruple of
India
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's
land
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 area which is 2973
million
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 kilometres square.
This
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 indicates that the increasing percentage of the
population
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 +1.11 % after 2017 and the massive density populace of 455, as recorded, jeopardize the Indian
land
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.
In contrast
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,
Although
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 the
USA
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 has a considerable
land
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 area which displays the second highest acreage in the table and accounted for 9147
million
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 kilometres square, their smallest
population
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 which is 327
million
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 and the occupied dense of people at 36 do not pose any problem for American
citizens
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 in comparison with other two countries.
However
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,
USA
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 Urban
citizens
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 are around 83% much more exceeding
China
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 and
India
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, where the rural area in
China
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 is nearly half of the country and a minority of Indians are in the city 32%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, china, india, usa, citizens, land, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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