The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart gives information about components of the gross domestic product (GDP) in both

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the IT

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and

service

industry

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the united

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united

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United

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Kingdom

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from

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the

year

1992 to 2000. It is clearly seen that

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the IT

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industry

increased gradually,

however

GDP-based

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GDP based

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service

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the service

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industry

go up unpredictably except in 1996 was a little bit reduced. Based on the graph, the rate of

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the IT

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industry

was

rised

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risen

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by 25% till 1996 which

revealed

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was revealed

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to be declined

around

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by around

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2%. In the

year

1998

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,1998

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it was increased by 50%.

Finally

, it reached

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apply

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the high pic in the

year

2000.

On the other hand

, the rate of GDP- based on

service

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the service

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industry

was

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apply

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doubled in the

year

2000 compared to the first

year

however

slightly increased from the previous years

such

as in 1992-2000. In the

year

1998 was nearly doubled compared to the first

year

1992.

However

, the rate of GDP-based

service

industry

in both 1996 and 1998 was more similar.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, industry, year with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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3 paragraphs

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GDP
consumption
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government spending
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positive values
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