You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates data on monthly families' expenditures on 3 items in 2010.
Overall
, Food spending is at its highest amount
in February, gas
spending is at its highest in April and families paid the most for clothing in April. The average spending shows that March
was the month
when citizens spend the highest amount
of money on these items.
Starting from food
section, the US citizens paid a little Correct article usage
the food
bellow
500 Correct your spelling
below
millions
in January. Change to singular
million
This
amount
raise moderately in the next month
to reach its highes
Correct your spelling
highest
amount
(550 million dollars). Then
food expediture
fell in the next Correct your spelling
expenditure
month
to register its lowest figures in April at a little over 300. Turning to gas
spending, in January families paid approximately 330 millions
for Change to singular
million
gas
. In the subsequent month
the Add a comma
,month
amount
of spending on gas
declined to become circa 250, and then
returned to its previous figure in March
. The highest expenditure in
fuel Change preposition
on
experienced
in April: roughly 560 million dollars. Clothing had been a sector that fluctuated throughout the period. Add a missing verb
was experienced
Started
from over Wrong verb form
Starting
the
220 Correct article usage
apply
millions
in January, it registered a substantial rise in February (nearly 560 Change to singular
million
millions
) and Change to singular
million
then
decreased to almost 300 millions
in Change to singular
million
March
. The clothing expenditure rocketed in the next month
underwent
the highest spending figure (nearly 640 Correct word choice
and underwent
millions
) in the whole period and among the 3 Change to singular
million
sector
.
The average line graph demonstrates that the spending average was constant for the first two Change to a plural noun
sectors
month
in 360 and Change to a plural noun
months
then
registered a hike in March
sitting at 420 million dollars. finally
it declined to finish at 280 Add a comma
,finally
millions
.Change to singular
million
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, gas, march, month, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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