The chart below shows information was about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries

The chart below shows information was about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries
The given chart illustrates the average percentage of 3 various
challenges
that people encounter when they immigrate in 3 different groups of ages. The initial impression is that
while
people who are between 18 and 34
years
old have the biggest proportion of finding accommodations and making friends
challenges
,
immigrants
who are more than 55
years
old have the biggest contribution to learning the local language challenge As can be seen,
although
adults between 18 to 34
years
old contribute to the lowest percentage of learning the native tongue of immigrated country, which is 29%, they have the highest ratio of other issues among all age groups.
In contrast
, the over 55
years
old group consists of 54% of people who face learning the local language problem and there are almost the same contribution of finding accommodations and striking up friendships issues in
this
group. Turning next to
immigrants
who are aged from 35 to 54
years
old , the table clearly shows that the proportion of
immigrants
who encounter learning the tongue of the new country and making friendships
challenges
is approximately 35% and finding somewhere to live problem is responsible for 39% of
challenges
among
this
group of
immigrants
.
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