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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbour

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Dear Neighbour, I hope
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 couple of days. I really appreciate
everyone
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's cooperation with 
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 parking space for
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 couple of months,
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,
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 an increased number of private vehicles, parking has become very congested which is
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 major issue for all neighbours. Not only
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, more vehicles have to be parked on the road which has blocked the streets and entrance for houses. I think
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's contribution to
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 matter can bring some changes
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allocating
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 more areas
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 suitable parking not only provides more space
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 people but
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 saves their precious time. I would like to arrange a meeting so that
everyone
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 can propose their ideas and give some suggestions. How about next long weekend on Saturday? I think
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 will be available on that day, If not write me back with
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 suitable date and location for a meeting. I look forward to your prompt response. Regards, Amanjot Kaur.
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grammar
Address minor grammatical mistakes for a more polished text (e.g., 'concern of parking problem' should be 'concern over the parking problem').
coherence
Ensure that each paragraph addresses a single idea to improve clarity.
tone
Clear greeting and closing, providing a friendly yet formal tone.
content
The letter discusses the problem, suggests solutions, and proposes a meeting clearly.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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