The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the percentage of foreigners in a country who face three
challenges
such
as making friends
, finding somewhere to live, and learning the local language
in three age categories.
Overall
, at younger ages, people
have more problems
with making a friend and fewer problems
with learning a local language
than other ages, aged people
have reverse statistics.
The group of people
between 18-34 are weak to make friends
when they immigrate to another country and %46 of them have challenges
with this
matter, whereas
%40 face finding somewhere to live and just %29 have problems
with learning the local language
. It is clearly seen, people
between 35 and 54 have roughly as much as challenges
in three fields but in older ages ( over 55), %54 of them cannot learn that language
. Conversely
, they can find friends
with ease and %23 have problems
with making friends
. Similarly
, only %22 encounter challenges
in finding accommodation.Submitted by mhshid on
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