The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the percentage of foreigners in a country who face three
challenges
such
as making
friends
, finding somewhere to live, and learning the local
language
in three age categories.
Overall
, at younger ages,
people
have more
problems
with making a friend and fewer
problems
with learning a local
language
than other ages, aged
people
have reverse statistics. The group of
people
between 18-34 are weak to make
friends
when they immigrate to another country and %46 of them have
challenges
with
this
matter,
whereas
%40 face finding somewhere to live and just %29 have
problems
with learning the local
language
. It is clearly seen,
people
between 35 and 54 have roughly as much as
challenges
in three fields but in older ages ( over 55), %54 of them cannot learn that
language
.
Conversely
, they can find
friends
with ease and %23 have
problems
with making
friends
.
Similarly
, only %22 encounter
challenges
in finding accommodation.
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