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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Harpreet, I hear in the previous letter that you are moving to my
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 for your new job. I am very excited to meet you soon. As your new job is set up in Toronto
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 in IT department.
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 is very convenient for new employees and it has a variety of jobs in the IT field. You are keen on exploring new places so
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 has many interesting places. It is suitable for you to find accommodation in sharing and you can easily find space near to your job. Unfortunately, Toronto is rich in public transport. There are so many modes of transport
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 as trains, buses, bicycles and trams. Somebody can easily afford these modes with cheap tickets and the services of public transport are very fast.
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 has a wide variety of cultures and people are polite and good sense of humour. You can easily make new friends here at any place. I am waiting to see you seen here. Best Wishes, Veerpal

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