Living at a place far from your native land will be difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

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common

fact that

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continuing

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a different place from your native county could be challenging. I believe people should not change their living country for any reason because it will be difficult for them. Those who change their living places are bounded to feel homesick and struggle with different

culinaries

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culinary

. The vast majority of

individuals

who move to other places from

homeland

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their homeland

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experience the feeling of loneliness. Some of them describe

this

emotion as

homesick

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therefore

, they will be exhausted in their routine lives.

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group of people

eager

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to return back to their homelands for feeling better as soon as possible. Each year lots of university students,

for example

, move around the world to start a new pathway in their lives, and after a month they all feel homesick. Cultures and environments which are extraordinary to

individuals

can affect their emotions.

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, students want to visit their parents to feel better in the short term. Not only do

individuals

who move to different

country

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countries

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feel homesick but

also

face

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unusual culinary cultures. Those may not be comfortable with the

diffent

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different

types of meats, vegetables or cooking techniques.

For instance

, a vegan student who moves to the Middle East may

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difficulties

for

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eating.

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there

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lots of restaurants

ignore

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special eating choices which are important for allergic

individuals

and

the

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special group of consumers

such

as vegans. In conclusion, living apart from your origin country and family may be hard. My point of view is

this

fact is completely true because those people may experience homesickness and

dissatisfy

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with different eating habits.

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