A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

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moving into my city. Anyway, congratulations on your new job and welcome to my place. Since you are new here in my city I'm suggesting that you must visit Ocean Park which is one of the most interesting tourist spots in London and it's very near to your location. If you are looking for a mall try to go to Debenhams Mall where you can find everything your need.

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, there are some restaurants available nearby especially your favourite seafood and Korean restaurant. It's a 10-minute away from your apartment and you can ride either by a metro train or car.

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you will see a huge tennis court where you can meet new people with the same interest as you. I can't wait to see you and look around my city. Best Regards, Jolo

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