The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram gives information about how
plastic
products
are recycled.
Overall
, it is discernible from the diagram that this
is a process with 6 stages, starting with the buying, using and discarding of plastics and ending with newly recycled products
entering the market again.
In the first stage, plastic
products
which are stored and displayed in shops are purchased, used and thrown away. Plastic
bags and other garbage are directed to landfill sites while
plastic
bottles and containers are collected for further
recycling process. The plastic
bottles are then
taken to a sorting house where they can be properly triaged, either manually or automatically.
Once the plastics have been sorted out, they are loaded onto trucks and transported to factories where they will be processed and made into new plastic
products
. Finally
, these new, recycled plastic
products
are contributed to retail stores where they will be sold, reused and discarded, thereby continuing the recycling process.Submitted by quangduong11750 on
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