The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which
milk
and other related
products
are made.
Overall
, the
process
involves six different steps cows grazing, milking, keeping the
milk
in the freezing storage, delivering the
milk
to the dairy factory,
milk
pasteurization and packaging, and
lastly
, shipping the final
products
to markets and shops. The
process
of
milk
production begins with the cow grazing on the farms. These cows will be milked out by a milking machine twice a day. The
milk
then
will be stored in big refrigeration storage. From
this
point, the
milk
produced will be sent daily to the dairy factory by a
milk
tanker. Once arrived in the dairy, the
milk
will be processed either as a form of
milk
or other
products
such
as cheese, cream and butter. Before the fresh
milk
is packaged, it will undergo a
process
known as pasteurization to make it clean and clear from bacteria and viruses.
Then
, after these
products
are packaged nicely, they will be ready to be sold in markets and shops.
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