The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which Use synonyms
milk
and other related Use synonyms
products
are made.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
process
involves six different steps cows grazing, milking, keeping the Use synonyms
milk
in the freezing storage, delivering the Use synonyms
milk
to the dairy factory, Use synonyms
milk
pasteurization and packaging, and Use synonyms
lastly
, shipping the final Linking Words
products
to markets and shops.
The Use synonyms
process
of Use synonyms
milk
production begins with the cow grazing on the farms. These cows will be milked out by a milking machine twice a day. The Use synonyms
milk
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then
will be stored in big refrigeration storage. From Linking Words
this
point, the Linking Words
milk
produced will be sent daily to the dairy factory by a Use synonyms
milk
tanker. Once arrived in the dairy, the Use synonyms
milk
will be processed either as a form of Use synonyms
milk
or other Use synonyms
products
Use synonyms
such
as cheese, cream and butter. Before the fresh Linking Words
milk
is packaged, it will undergo a Use synonyms
process
known as pasteurization to make it clean and clear from bacteria and viruses. Use synonyms
Then
, after these Linking Words
products
are packaged nicely, they will be ready to be sold in markets and shops.Use synonyms
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