living in a country where you have to speak forign language can cause serious problemls as well as practical problems. to what extend do you agree

It is difficult to adjust in a foreign land especially when one has to speak in their
language
.
This
will certainly bring cultural differences creating social problems as well. I would agree
to
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statement and in the following ,lines I will explain more on the topic. To start with, it is obvious that when one speaks another
language
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language
, the accent, fluency and tone of the
language
spoken are different with noticeable alterations to the native speakers. When
this
happens,
firstly
convincing a message would be difficult. For ,instance you are an Asian living in New York City, when you
initially
speak in English it will look strange to them probably creating a misunderstanding with them. In ,addition when
such
things happen, you will be under their eyes if anything can be done to you kind of thing.
This
ideation of the locality would down look at you creating unnecessary commentaries
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and creating a hustling situation where you live. For ,example if you go around and meet someone, you talk to them and get insulted or you just simply walk away remaining silent to their reaction. ,
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such
inferiority and emotions are downplayed by native speakers,
psychologically
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you will be affected and distorted. ,
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for ,some it is not like that always, they take it in a positive way and bring changes in the
language
to prove them wrong about their ability.
Nonetheless
, despite bringing changes in the
language
formation with correct grammar and structural formation the accent remains the same where your identity stays as it is. As long as your identity remains, some kind of differentiation in society sticks too. So
lastly
, living in a foreign land, and speaking their
language
will have a tough time adjusting to their society caring about one’s accent, even
then
one can stay positive by bringing changes in the way they live in the foreign land.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic hurdles
  • Cultural nuances
  • Social integration
  • Language proficiency
  • Income disparity
  • Multilingual environment
  • Language acquisition
  • Communication breakdown
  • Social alienation
  • Resilience
  • Bilingualism
  • Intercultural dialogue
  • Language education
  • Adaptability
  • Cultural adaptation
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