Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop. Discuss bọth views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals say that economic
growth
is the only method to
end
world
poverty
and
hunger
. Others say that economic
growth
is harming the ecosystem and should stop. In my opinion, economic
growth
is
only
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way to
end
of
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world
poverty
and
hunger
due to
it
create
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creates
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job opportunities for
people
and
it
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make improvements in agriculture sectors. On the one hand, some believe that economic
growth
have
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a
negtaive
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negative
impacts
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impact
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on
environment
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the environment
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.
This
is because economic
growth
mean
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increase
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an increase
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the
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number of
factories
, which these
factories
use fossil fuel.
Consequently
, more
burn
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out
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fossil fuel mean more Co 2 emission
release
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from
factories
to the atmosphere, which mean more Co2 footprint mean
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an increase
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increase
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increased
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a
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chance of global warming and climate.
Furthermore
, more
factories
mean more air pollution, which
this
have
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has
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adverse
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an adverse
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influence on
people
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health. To illustrate, air contamination can make
people
more vulnerable to get serious diseases namely, cancer, asthma, and high blood pressure.
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those
people
who believe economic
growth
only way to
end
world
poverty
and
hunger
.
To begin
with, economic
growth
mean
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more companies will enter
job
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the job
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market of countries, which
mean
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means
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more companies mean more job opportunities for
people
.
For example
,
thousand
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thousands
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of
people
will work
on
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companies as engineers, managers,
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and cashier
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cashier
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cashiers
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, which
this
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can contribute to
improve
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improving
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living
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the living
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standards of
people
and
reduce
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reducing
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poverty
.
As a result
, less
poverty
mean
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less crime.
Moreover
, economic
growth
mean
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means
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more improvements in
agriculture
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the agriculture
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sector, which
this
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can
increase
of availability of food. To demonstrate, improvements in farming help
farmes
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farms
to use
advance
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methods
such
as
,
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genetic modification to plant
furits
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fruits
and
vegtables
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vegetables
, which
this
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make food
growth
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grow
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faster and resist diseases.
To sum up
, from my perspective,
althouth econmoic
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although economic
growth
can a detrimental
conseqence
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consequence
consequences
on
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the ecosytem
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ecosytem
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ecosystem
ecosystems
such
as
,
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pollution, climate change , and global warming , I believe economic
growth
is the only way to
end
world
poverty
and
hunger
because it
create
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creates
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jobs for
people
, and
increase
availability
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the availability
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of food.
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