Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some
university
charges their students
more than usual because there is no financial support
from their government
. Sometimes a short academic course would ruin parents’ budget
. I strongly agree with asking the Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
government
to support
student
and make higher Fix the agreement mistake
students
education
free and easier in
any Change preposition
at
level
.
Firstly
, education
at any level
from school up to the higher educational level
in university
should be free. This
idea creates the same chance for all students
to achieve themselves. For instance
, education
in astronomy
department cost more than usual for Correct article usage
the astronomy
students
,
and just prosperous Remove the comma
apply
students
can participate and educate in these kinds of specialty
. Change the spelling
speciality
Education
should be free at any level
for all students
with any financial background.
Secondly
, any government
has a significant role to improve their people
knowledge. Change noun form
people's
This
just will happen when there is enough financial support
from government
to the Correct article usage
the government
students
and university
to approve any learners or students
with special talents. As an illustration, Supporting many students
who are working on robotic
, not only Replace the word
robotics
this
Add a missing verb
does this
support
help students
to improve themselves, but also
this
has quite positive effects Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
their country. Change preposition
on
Furthermore
, free education
helps society to get improve at their favorite
and the country will achieve at any point. Free Change the spelling
favourite
education
most
be a fundamental right for indigenous citizens and Correct your spelling
must
government
should consider a considerable budget for any Correct article usage
the government
university
.
In conclusion, free educational
at any Replace the word
education
level
most
Correct your spelling
must
be
supported Change the verb form
is
from
any Change preposition
by
government
, due the
fact that all Change preposition
to the
students
create their countries
future and a prosperous country needs higher Change noun form
country's
education
and with workers with high level
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levels
literate
.Change preposition
of literate
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite