An overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Thank him for the invitation and accept the invitation • Write details about your visit • Briefly describe what you want to do there.

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Dear Jaskaran I hope

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letter finds you well at home. I’m just writing to let you know that I’ll be visiting your house in two weeks, as planned before. I was really happy to hear from you. I still haven’t forgotten about our laughs from high school. I’m glad and thankful that we’ll get to live those moments all over again just because of your invitation. So, get ready to meet me in approximately two weeks. I’ll be visiting you for three days only. I know it’s only a few days, but we will make the most out of it. My flight from Delhi to Toronto will depart at 2:30 am on the 27th Of August. The flight will land at Pearson Airport around noon on the same day. My return flight is on the 1st of September. Don’t mind me, but I’ve made a list of places that I have always wanted to visit in Toronto. Most important, I want to visit the CN Tower. I want to eat lots of local food, go to Karaoke, and sing my heart out. And

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, I want to visit your grandma too because I’m missing her jokes. See you soon. Best wishes, Navdeep Kaur

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
excitement
itinerary
arrival
accommodation
transportation
local customs
landmarks
culinary delights
get-together
pack essentials
cultural norms
sightseeing
reunion
recommendations
invaluable experience

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An overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Thank him for the invitation and accept the invitation • Write details about your visit • Briefly describe what you want to do there.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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