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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays what number of household's annual
income
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 has changed in three time periods (2007,2011 and 2015) in the country of the US.
Overall
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,
Households
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 which were earning the highest were kept on increasing
while
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, the
families
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 whose annual
income
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 was less than most average
households
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 were fluctuating throughout the period and some average annual earners were ranging in number of
households
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. At the beginning of the period, the vast majority of
households
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'
income
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 was more than $100,000 which is almost 30
million
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Households
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nonetheless
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,
this
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 figure kept on rising to approximately 33
million
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households
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 who were earning
this
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 much
income
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 in the year 2015.
Although
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, there was a slight dip in 2011 when
families
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 of houses were depleted by around 5
million
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households
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.
Furthermore
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,
families
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 which were accumulating an average
income
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 between $50,000 to $75,000 ranged from 13
million
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 to 15
million
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families
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 throughout the period.
Households
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 in the US which were earning less than $50,000 were fluctuating. In 2007, these
families
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 were at around 25-27
million
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 but in the next four years it jumped to almost 30
million
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households
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 and by the year 2015, they dwindled in numbers to an average of 27
million
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households
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households, families, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
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