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The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares data by percentage for internet users in the
USA
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,
Mexico
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, and
Canada
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 over the period of 11 years, from 1999 to 2009. It is clearly seen that
Canada
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 is responsible for the highest change over these years.
Also
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,
Mexico
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 had always been consuming the lowest amount of the web.
Furthermore
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, people in the
USA
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 and
Canada
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 comprised the fastest growth in comparison to Mexican people. In the beginning, in 1991, the
USA
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,
Canada
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, and
Mexico
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 took up the highest to the lowest figures for utilizing the Internet, respectively.
Then
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, they experienced a considerable increase in which both
Canada
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 and the
USA
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 reached the same percentage of 48% in 2002.
Next,
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Canadian and American individuals used the web with a swift rise and different slopes which lead to the same number at approximately 65% in 2005. After that, the consumption of Canadians made up the highest percentage in 2009.
Mexico
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,
on the other hand
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, in 1999 stood at just under 5%.
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this
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, it contains the lowest growth among other countries.
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, Mexican peoples consume a great amount of the Net which peaked at nearly 45% in 2009.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, mexico, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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