The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall.
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airlines
cost has become less expensive than before. Change to a genitive case
airline's
airlines'
While
this
phenomenon has a positive consequences
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a positive consequence
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transferring
at
any place around the world and increasing Change preposition
to
the
tourism, others feel that it is a bad situation because some Correct article usage
apply
countries
will become overcrowded.
Less costation
for airlines Correct your spelling
constipation
it
is a good and a successful phenomenon. Correct pronoun usage
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This
phenomenon leads to prosperity to
nations, the tourism has Change preposition
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been
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last
10 years which leads to more profit and more incomes
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income
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as painting, and archtictures
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architecture
architectures
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, such
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such
as many countries
well be crowded. As
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A
number
of tourists will be increased so some Change the article
a number
the number
countries
will suffer from traffic transportation, especially these countries
that
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there
roads are not well Replace the word
their
desigined
but have many historical places to visit. Correct your spelling
designed
For instance
, Egypt county is full of historical places to visit but their roads are not suitable to make the transportation there easy.
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