The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall.

In modern days, the
airlines
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cost has become less expensive than before.
While
this
phenomenon has
a positive consequences
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positive consequences
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such
as
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transffering
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transferring
of knowledge
at
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any place around the world and increasing
the
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tourism, others feel that it is a bad situation because some
countries
will become overcrowded. Less
costation
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constipation
for airlines
it
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is a good and a successful phenomenon.
This
phenomenon leads to prosperity
to
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nations, the tourism has
been
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increased around the world .
For instance
, in the
Netherlands
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the number of tourists increased in the
last
10 years which leads to more profit and more
incomes
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.
Besides
, knowledge transformation has become much easier,
such
as painting, and
archtictures
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architecture
architectures
.
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countries
,
such
as Doupe built the thighs touir when they saw evil touir in Parise.
In contrast
to,these positive impact there is a negative side
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it
such
as many
countries
well be crowded.
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number
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of tourists will be increased so some
countries
will suffer from traffic transportation, especially these
countries
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there
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roads are not well
desigined
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designed
but have many historical places to visit.
For instance
, Egypt county is full of historical places to visit but their roads are not suitable to make the transportation there easy. In conclusion, as
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side there are drow backs and positive
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for
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loss cost airlines the drow backs are
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crowded and
the
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positive are more prosperity to nations and
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knowledge
knowldge
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knowledge
transformations
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Affordability
  • Global mobility
  • Convenience
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic benefits
  • Cultural exchange
  • Enhanced connectivity
  • Drawbacks
  • Sustainable travel
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