As well as making money, businesses also have social respinsibilities, to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Businesses are always driven by money-making pursuits, which,

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, is argued that it needs to shoulder social responsibilities as well. From my perspective, I am in favour of

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opinion, believing that not only should enterprises and entrepreneurs aim to make a profit but take more duties into consideration. Living in a world full of competitiveness and stress, there is no doubt that businessmen and corporations make an effort to earn as much money as they

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gaining an edge over competitors.

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, Apple's company endeavours to lower the manufacturing cost and increase the sale price so that it can reap more revenue from the market.

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, all interested parties,

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as shareholders, governments and so on, can benefit from it.

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, profit-driven pursuits could fuel people and enterprises to make progress through unremitting effort, because wealth is able to make many dreams come true.

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, business persons can improve the living standard for themselves and their families, which brings them happiness and well-being.

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, the country provides us with opportunities to do business,

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individuals and organizations engaging in commercial activities ought to make contributions to society.

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with, the community offers well-built infrastructure and sufficient employees for people to make a fortune, which in turn should be paid back by money-makers. Apart from paying taxes, Apple company and other international corporations

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donate a great sum of money to local charities and the less fortunate, thereby achieving higher value beyond money-making goals.

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, the wealth in the country can be distributed more equally when individuals and enterprises take their social responsibilities, say, investing their gains into neighbourhoods to render assistance to those in need,

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building a harmonious society with a narrow gap between the haves and have-nots. In conclusion,

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it is true that individuals and companies in the businesses should spare no pains in maximizing profit, there is a wider role to play for them in society.