the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in 4 asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040

the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in 4 asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The given line graph illustrates data on the percentage of the
population
in the
Philippines
,
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia for half of a century
in addition
to THE predicted
number
for the next 2 decades.
Overall
, the trend of rising
population
in
Malaysia
and Indonesia witnessed a considerable increase
while
2 other countries increased gradually during past decades,
also
the soaring trend of citizens living in
cities
seems to keep the identical path.
To begin
with, in 1970 the
Philippines
started recording over 30% of its citizens living in
cities
while
in the same
era
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only about 12% of Indonesians were located in urban areas.
However
, these two countries statics started to increase and by 2020, over 70% and 50% of the
population
of respectively
Philippines
and Indonesia were living in
cities
. It is anticipated that these two countries reach the
number
of nearly 80% and 60% by 2040.
On the other hand
, at the starting point
Malaysia
with 30% of its people living in urban areas and Thailand with nearly 20% of its total
population
started a fluctuating process. By 1990,
Malaysia
witnessed a considerable increase reaching 50%
then
this
number
fell to nearly 45% in 2010
then
it soared up again and it can be expected to reach a
number
around 60%. Following that, about 20% of Thailand’s
population
were living in towns and
cities
in 1979, after 40 years
this
trend raised and reached a mutual point with the
Philippines
recording about 45% of citizens and
finally
, it is predicted to reach a
number
of approximately 50% of its
population
living in
cities
by 2040.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, philippines, malaysia, number, cities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • rural-urban migration
  • economic development
  • industrialization
  • infrastructure strain
  • environmental impacts
  • social challenges
  • urban planning
  • government policies
  • housing policies
  • public services
  • trend analysis
  • prediction
  • initiatives
  • urban growth management
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