the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in 4 asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The given line graph illustrates data on the percentage of the
population
in the Use synonyms
Philippines
, Use synonyms
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia for half of a century Use synonyms
in addition
to THE predicted Linking Words
number
for the next 2 decades. Use synonyms
Overall
, the trend of rising Linking Words
population
in Use synonyms
Malaysia
and Indonesia witnessed a considerable increase Use synonyms
while
2 other countries increased gradually during past decades, Linking Words
also
the soaring trend of citizens living in Linking Words
cities
seems to keep the identical path.
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To begin
with, in 1970 the Linking Words
Philippines
started recording over 30% of its citizens living in Use synonyms
cities
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while
in the same Linking Words
era
only about 12% of Indonesians were located in urban areas. Add a comma
,era
However
, these two countries statics started to increase and by 2020, over 70% and 50% of the Linking Words
population
of respectively Use synonyms
Philippines
and Indonesia were living in Use synonyms
cities
. It is anticipated that these two countries reach the Use synonyms
number
of nearly 80% and 60% by 2040.
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On the other hand
, at the starting point Linking Words
Malaysia
with 30% of its people living in urban areas and Thailand with nearly 20% of its total Use synonyms
population
started a fluctuating process. By 1990, Use synonyms
Malaysia
witnessed a considerable increase reaching 50% Use synonyms
then
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this
Linking Words
number
fell to nearly 45% in 2010 Use synonyms
then
it soared up again and it can be expected to reach a Linking Words
number
around 60%. Following that, about 20% of Thailand’s Use synonyms
population
were living in towns and Use synonyms
cities
in 1979, after 40 years Use synonyms
this
trend raised and reached a mutual point with the Linking Words
Philippines
recording about 45% of citizens and Use synonyms
finally
, it is predicted to reach a Linking Words
number
of approximately 50% of its Use synonyms
population
living in Use synonyms
cities
by 2040.Use synonyms
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