the graph below gives information about the percentage of population in 4 asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The given line graph illustrates data on the percentage of the
population
in the Philippines
, Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia for half of a century in addition
to THE predicted number
for the next 2 decades. Overall
, the trend of rising population
in Malaysia
and Indonesia witnessed a considerable increase while
2 other countries increased gradually during past decades, also
the soaring trend of citizens living in cities
seems to keep the identical path.
To begin
with, in 1970 the Philippines
started recording over 30% of its citizens living in cities
while
in the same era
only about 12% of Indonesians were located in urban areas. Add a comma
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However
, these two countries statics started to increase and by 2020, over 70% and 50% of the population
of respectively Philippines
and Indonesia were living in cities
. It is anticipated that these two countries reach the number
of nearly 80% and 60% by 2040.
On the other hand
, at the starting point Malaysia
with 30% of its people living in urban areas and Thailand with nearly 20% of its total population
started a fluctuating process. By 1990, Malaysia
witnessed a considerable increase reaching 50% then
this
number
fell to nearly 45% in 2010 then
it soared up again and it can be expected to reach a number
around 60%. Following that, about 20% of Thailand’s population
were living in towns and cities
in 1979, after 40 years this
trend raised and reached a mutual point with the Philippines
recording about 45% of citizens and finally
, it is predicted to reach a number
of approximately 50% of its population
living in cities
by 2040.Submitted by eemami14 on
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