Dear Ayesha,
I am your neighbour. We shifted here a month ago and we rarely got a chance to introduce
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we have been enjoying living in the neighbourhood so we decided to throw a party to get to know each other. I apologise in advance if the music and sound system provide a hindrance to your comfort.
As I and my sister have graduated, so we are having a small function at my place, all friends and family have been invited. The function will start at 7 pm followed by a couple of activities with friends,
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, games, music and dance. The dinner will be served at 10 PM, You are
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invited to the party.
I will be pleased if you join the party with your family as in that way we may able to know each other much better way.
Sincerely,
Haleema