Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Environmental
problems
are increasing day by day. Alongside, various methods to overcome these damages are
also
taking place. Some individuals argue that the biggest hardship we might face
due to
environmental hazards might be the loss of important animals and plants.
However
, others debate that, these are not the only
problems
being faced. There
are
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plenty
of
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more to it as well. In
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essay, I will explain both
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perspectives.
Additionally
, will
also
give my opinion, explaining how it is only limited to living beings.
To begin
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if we see environmental
problems
are seriously alarming. Various
problems
such
as
,
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pollution, climate change,
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and ozone
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layer depletion are not good for well beings health and are giving rise to new diseases for which there is no cure available.
Due to
lack of proper
medications
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the individuals might end up dying.
For instance
, Australia is suffering from
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very harmful bacteria, which scientists believe is obtained
due to
the polluted environment and is directly affecting the population of animals and plants.
Whereas
there is no cure invented
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now to stop
this
hazardous disease.
Furthermore
, there are other
problems
as well that arise
due to
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damage.
Although
if we see they are not that important and harmful as
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to
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mentioned above.
Nevertheless
, it cannot be fully ignored. One small issue can lead to
big
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problem. So, it is important we focus on them on time and try to eradicate
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them
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as soon as possible.
For example
, the ozone layer diminishing was increasing in the USA.
Therefore
, the government took strict action and spread awareness among citizens on how they can overcome it and after several months
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ozone layer is safe now, all
due to
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and maturity
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by the law and people. In conclusion, I believe all these
problems
are unstoppable, yet there are numerous ways we can overcome them. So, putting our world on top priority
this
is our moral and ethical right to go till the end and protect our environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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