A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying his subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - give details of the course you took at the university - explain why you recommend the university - give some advice about how to apply

Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I heard that you are still deciding to choose a
course
for your next semester.  I am writing
this
letter to inform you of some information about a
course
which I took
last
year at
university
.  The
course
I recommend you is the ' Pre-med programme ' at the
University
of Calgary.  You and I have been dreaming
to be
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a doctor for the future since we were young.  So, We need to get some credits related to science subjects to enter Med School after taking a degree from
university
first. The Pre-med programme offers several science subjects like physics, biology and chemistry.
Additionally
, the only reason why I have a good reputation at the
University
of Calgary is that they have fewer semesters to get a doctor's degree compared with other Med schools. As compared to tuition way, It is more affordable and reasonable for you. 
And
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also
, I want to let you know how to
apply
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this
course
.  They open
at the end
of May
this
year to receive applications.  You must apply on the first day and you have to make some references from your high school teacher including your valuable personality and high score in a high school. I am looking forward to seeing you at the
University
of Calgary next year. Cheers, Diana
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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